How to Write a Band 9 IELTS Essay

Band 9 IELTS Vocabulary Writing Task 1 | 9 Band Structure | How to Write a Band 9 IELTS Essay
UK 50%
SINGAPORE 34
DUBAI 7
JAPAN 3 BRAZIL 6

Band 5

50% of passengers are from the Uk.
The passengers from Singapore are 34 percent of the total number.
Firstly, we change verb (are)
to represent
to account for
to make up
Cruise passengers by country, per cent

Band 6

Britons represent 50% of all passengers.
The Singaporeans  account for 34% of the total number.
Tourists from, Dubai, Japan and Brazil make up the remaining 16% of the people on board.
 Percentage repeat
20% – 1/5
every fifth passenger
one passenger out of five
Band 9 IELTS Vocabulary Writing Task 1 | 9 Band Structure | How to Write a Band 9 IELTS Essay

Band 7

Britons represent half of all passengers.
The Singapore  account for over one third of the total number.
Nationalities
People from UK  –  the British people
or the British
or Britons

Band 9

The UK is the largest cruise market, with Britons representing over half of all passengers.