Β 1. SubjectβVerb Agreement
β People likes to spend time online.
β
People like to spend time online.
π Rule: βPeopleβ is plural β use βlike,β not βlikes.β
πΉ 2. SingularβPlural Confusion
β There are many problem in my city.
β
There are many problems in my city.
π Rule: Use plural forms with many, several, a few, etc.
πΉ 3. Using Uncountable Nouns Incorrectly
β I have many informations about this topic.
β
I have a lot of information about this topic.
π Rule: βInformation,β βadvice,β βfurniture,β βhomeworkβ β uncountable nouns (no s).
πΉ 4. Missing Articles (a, an, the)
β Government should provide better healthcare.
β
The government should provide better healthcare.
π Rule: Use βtheβ when referring to a specific group or thing.
πΉ 5. Repetition of Words
β Nowadays technology is very important. Technology helps people in many ways. Technology is developing fast.
β
Nowadays, technology plays a vital role in our lives and is rapidly advancing in many areas.
π Tip: Use synonyms or paraphrasing to avoid repetition β e.g., innovation, digital tools, modern devices.
πΉ 6. Informal Language
β Kids are getting lazy because of phones.
β
Children are becoming lazy because of smartphones.
π Rule: Avoid informal words like kids, stuff, a lot of, gonna, wanna, etc.
πΉ 7. Wrong Word Forms
β Government should encourage the develop of new industries.
β
The government should encourage the development of new industries.
π Rule: Use the correct noun/verb/adjective form (develop β development).
πΉ 8. Overuse of Personal Pronouns
β I think pollution is bad. I believe people should stop it. I feel it is dangerous.
β
Pollution is a serious issue that needs urgent attention from the government and individuals.
π Tip: Minimize βI think / I believeβ β make sentences more formal and academic.
πΉ 9. Run-On Sentences (No Proper Punctuation)
β People use cars it makes pollution and traffic problems.
β
People use cars, which causes pollution and traffic problems.
π Rule: Use commas and linking words to join ideas properly.
πΉ 10. Not Using Linking Words Properly
β People use the internet. It is helpful. It is also harmful.
β
People use the internet, which is both helpful and harmful.
π Tip: Use connectors like however, moreover, therefore, on the other hand, as a result.
πΉ 11. Not Supporting Ideas with Examples
β Education is important for everyone.
β
Education is important for everyone, for example, it helps people get better jobs and improve their lives.
π Rule: Always give an example to support your idea (real or imaginary).
πΉ 12. Wrong Tense Usage
β In the future, people use electric cars.
β
In the future, people will use electric cars.
π Rule: Match tense to time β future = will + V1.
πΉ 13. Missing Plural Verbs with Plural Nouns
β Many people thinks that social media is harmful.
β
Many people think that social media is harmful.
π Rule: Plural noun β plural verb.
πΉ 14. Overgeneralization
β All young people are addicted to the internet.
β
Many young people are addicted to the internet.
π Tip: Avoid all, everyone, always β use many, most, some instead.
πΉ 15. Short, Choppy Sentences
β Technology is important. It helps people. It saves time.
β
Technology is important because it helps people save time and work more efficiently.
π Rule: Join short sentences to show complex grammar (Band 7+).
πΉ 16. Repeating the Question (No Paraphrasing)
β The question says that travelling is popular today. I agree that travelling is popular today.
β
Travelling has become increasingly common in modern times due to affordable transport and globalisation.
π Rule: Always paraphrase the question in your introduction.
πΉ 17. Word Count Too Low
β Essay only 220 words.
β
Write 250β280 words.
π Rule: Under-length essays lose marks in Task Response.
πΉ 18. Missing Clear Opinion
β There are advantages and disadvantages of online education.
β
In my opinion, the advantages of online education outweigh the drawbacks.
π Rule: Always state your opinion clearly (Band 7+ requirement).
πΉ 19. No Conclusion or Repeated Introduction
β In conclusion, I agree with this statement.
β
In conclusion, although there are some drawbacks, online education offers greater flexibility and access for learners worldwide.
π Rule: Conclusion = summary + opinion (no new idea).
πΉ 20. Wrong Prepositions
β Depend on to technology.
β
Depend on technology.
π Rule: Learn fixed prepositions: depend on, focus on, interested in, responsible for.

