Β 1. Subject–Verb Agreement

❌ People likes to spend time online.
βœ… People like to spend time online.
πŸ“˜ Rule: β€œPeople” is plural β†’ use β€œlike,” not β€œlikes.”

πŸ”Ή 2. Singular–Plural Confusion

❌ There are many problem in my city.
βœ… There are many problems in my city.
πŸ“˜ Rule: Use plural forms with many, several, a few, etc.

πŸ”Ή 3. Using Uncountable Nouns Incorrectly

❌ I have many informations about this topic.
βœ… I have a lot of information about this topic.
πŸ“˜ Rule: β€œInformation,” β€œadvice,” β€œfurniture,” β€œhomework” β†’ uncountable nouns (no s).

πŸ”Ή 4. Missing Articles (a, an, the)

❌ Government should provide better healthcare.
βœ… The government should provide better healthcare.
πŸ“˜ Rule: Use β€œthe” when referring to a specific group or thing.

πŸ”Ή 5. Repetition of Words

❌ Nowadays technology is very important. Technology helps people in many ways. Technology is developing fast.
βœ… Nowadays, technology plays a vital role in our lives and is rapidly advancing in many areas.
πŸ“˜ Tip: Use synonyms or paraphrasing to avoid repetition β€” e.g., innovation, digital tools, modern devices.

πŸ”Ή 6. Informal Language

❌ Kids are getting lazy because of phones.
βœ… Children are becoming lazy because of smartphones.
πŸ“˜ Rule: Avoid informal words like kids, stuff, a lot of, gonna, wanna, etc.

πŸ”Ή 7. Wrong Word Forms

❌ Government should encourage the develop of new industries.
βœ… The government should encourage the development of new industries.
πŸ“˜ Rule: Use the correct noun/verb/adjective form (develop β†’ development).

πŸ”Ή 8. Overuse of Personal Pronouns

❌ I think pollution is bad. I believe people should stop it. I feel it is dangerous.
βœ… Pollution is a serious issue that needs urgent attention from the government and individuals.
πŸ“˜ Tip: Minimize β€œI think / I believe” β€” make sentences more formal and academic.

πŸ”Ή 9. Run-On Sentences (No Proper Punctuation)

❌ People use cars it makes pollution and traffic problems.
βœ… People use cars, which causes pollution and traffic problems.
πŸ“˜ Rule: Use commas and linking words to join ideas properly.

πŸ”Ή 10. Not Using Linking Words Properly

❌ People use the internet. It is helpful. It is also harmful.
βœ… People use the internet, which is both helpful and harmful.
πŸ“˜ Tip: Use connectors like however, moreover, therefore, on the other hand, as a result.

πŸ”Ή 11. Not Supporting Ideas with Examples

❌ Education is important for everyone.
βœ… Education is important for everyone, for example, it helps people get better jobs and improve their lives.
πŸ“˜ Rule: Always give an example to support your idea (real or imaginary).

πŸ”Ή 12. Wrong Tense Usage

❌ In the future, people use electric cars.
βœ… In the future, people will use electric cars.
πŸ“˜ Rule: Match tense to time β€” future = will + V1.

πŸ”Ή 13. Missing Plural Verbs with Plural Nouns

❌ Many people thinks that social media is harmful.
βœ… Many people think that social media is harmful.
πŸ“˜ Rule: Plural noun β†’ plural verb.

πŸ”Ή 14. Overgeneralization

❌ All young people are addicted to the internet.
βœ… Many young people are addicted to the internet.
πŸ“˜ Tip: Avoid all, everyone, always β†’ use many, most, some instead.

πŸ”Ή 15. Short, Choppy Sentences

❌ Technology is important. It helps people. It saves time.
βœ… Technology is important because it helps people save time and work more efficiently.
πŸ“˜ Rule: Join short sentences to show complex grammar (Band 7+).

πŸ”Ή 16. Repeating the Question (No Paraphrasing)

❌ The question says that travelling is popular today. I agree that travelling is popular today.
βœ… Travelling has become increasingly common in modern times due to affordable transport and globalisation.
πŸ“˜ Rule: Always paraphrase the question in your introduction.

πŸ”Ή 17. Word Count Too Low

❌ Essay only 220 words.
βœ… Write 250–280 words.
πŸ“˜ Rule: Under-length essays lose marks in Task Response.

πŸ”Ή 18. Missing Clear Opinion

❌ There are advantages and disadvantages of online education.
βœ… In my opinion, the advantages of online education outweigh the drawbacks.
πŸ“˜ Rule: Always state your opinion clearly (Band 7+ requirement).

πŸ”Ή 19. No Conclusion or Repeated Introduction

❌ In conclusion, I agree with this statement.
βœ… In conclusion, although there are some drawbacks, online education offers greater flexibility and access for learners worldwide.
πŸ“˜ Rule: Conclusion = summary + opinion (no new idea).

πŸ”Ή 20. Wrong Prepositions

❌ Depend on to technology.
βœ… Depend on technology.
πŸ“˜ Rule: Learn fixed prepositions: depend on, focus on, interested in, responsible for.

Share.

Comments are closed.

Exit mobile version