UK 50%
SINGAPORE 34
DUBAI 7
JAPAN 3 BRAZIL 6
Band 5
50% of passengers are from the Uk.
The passengers from Singapore are 34 percent of the total number.
Firstly, we change verb (are)
to represent
to account for
to make up
Band 6
Britons represent 50% of all passengers.
The Singaporeans account for 34% of the total number.
Tourists from, Dubai, Japan and Brazil make up the remaining 16% of the people on board.
Percentage repeat
20% – 1/5
every fifth passenger
one passenger out of five
Band 7
Britons represent half of all passengers.
The Singapore account for over one third of the total number.
Nationalities
People from UK – the British people
or the British
or Britons
Band 9
The UK is the largest cruise market, with Britons representing over half of all passengers.
